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Horse transformation

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My part of the trade!
For :iconrockabillysteed: rockabillysteed 
Hope you like it! :)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

here are some cons. as a transformation lover, I love detail. I like to see fur patches growing, I like to see more fibrosis clothing tearing way.I would also like to see some color distinction. The hoof on the left foot doesn't quite look like a hoof. It looks like a mound of flesh because the same grey that you used on the ankle is the same color of the hoof.

I would like to see more of a horrific expression as well, I get that he is surprised, but what is he surprised over? the glowing horseshoe? Or the fact that he's becoming a horse?

Now, that's enough doom and gloom. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":-)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="392" title=":-) (Smile)"/> I love that you incorporate the story without even writing any dialogue. some poor sap at a store picks up an enchanted horse shoe. Classic. you have the proportions right, a good spot to put a mid transformation. His slight hunch leads into the imagination that he'll end up on all fours sooner or later.

Well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>